When I open my eyes ,and realise you are gone,
sun fades by ,darkness lit my light,
everything comes to abeyance,
everything comes back to what was cents before,
you showed me the road of mine,
you led me on a path of divine,
I am down standing here looking back on it,
and realise you are gone,
I stand straight to fight all along but huh ,
I lost my eyes,lost my conscious,
I have turned blind.
Yaar nitu!! This is unbelievable but it feels blissful to see a hidden poet behind your veil.... Keep up the good work dude...as a start this work is outstanding, I wasn't half of it when I started with poetry. Make it big. keep writing.
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ReplyDeletei cant believe u wrote it itz shocking to c u as a poet bt this 1 is gud 1 short and meaning ful gud wrk chap.
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